It Begins

It begins in a moment.
A small chance word,
A smile so innocent.
It is a sign.
Things change,
Life begins anew.
A new door opens,
An old door shuts for good.
Rainbow ends are found,
A pot of gold at the end.
A new beginning, to be sure,
The awakening of the soul,
A new chance to dream.
-Raven

Reviews

[Tim Gleim]

Really enjoyed your poem!

[Mercury Mirrors]

Very pretty. =] It has really good feeling behind it, not just words thrown together randomely. It makes sense. Great write.

[Thomas Philmore Jackson]

Very nicely written. I like the way you take us though the feelings of a new found love. I this was written after a love lost and the discovery of a new. Your words are strong, yet full of feeling.

[Cats Eye]

Nicely written, great use of words they came out strongly, great job on it i enjoyed reading this peice of your work.