The Friend

Eloquent words, veiling and hollow:

He shrouds my ears and consciousness.

In sinful mire I do still wallow:

Searching for truth in darkness.

Reviews

[Angi]

I have met people who dribble words from their mouths just to hear themselves speak. I really love short pieces, so much can be said in so few words. Nicely worked, Robert!

[Robert L.]

Thank you, Angi. I appreciate it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so the mystery is presented....real friend or?

hollow words of friendship with no actions to back them up?

or

truth could be that elusive friend we search for....yes, the possibilities that are presented in wonderful short pieces like this.

bravo!

jacob

[Robert L.]

Thank you, Jacob. Your comments are as insightful as your own poetry. I really appreciate it.

[Peter H]

good piece very intricate

[Robert L.]

Thank you for reading it.

[Sami Khalil]

That is some good poetry...Pen on ...:)

[Robert L.]

Thank you very much.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)