ukulele

more bullshit

i see you shining

but here I’m rotting

you’re radiating

I’m decaying

it’s too hot in here

sweat dripping in my ear

someone’s playing an ukulele

why

Reviews

[M]

I don't know if that was your intention but I laughed at the end.

[raven]

haha if you did than i am glad. you view things based on your perspective, and i cannot judge it, because there is no "right" way.

[M]

Cool thank you melon!
I will allow myself to laugh as I read this!
haha(ignore my humor I have been up for way too long)

[raven]

hahah i like that you are laughing though, don't see why i wouldn't. but if it is the lack of sleep that is tickling your funny bone than i recommend you sleep my friend. you ought to nourish your brain. ^_^ thanks for your input

[M]

lol thanks much love.

[Alice Poésy]

A perfect representation of humanity: How we compare ourselves to others "i see you shining/but here I'm rotting" and the constant thoughts of why on earth "someone's playing an ukulele" while "it's too hot in here" for us.

A short and entertaining read; loved it!

[raven]

thanks for the sweet detailed review!

[Gray]

Maybe they're playing it to take their mind off the heat. lol

[raven]

hahahaha yes it could be

[Inject Positivity]

Leaves the reader something to think about... I think the first four lines painted the pain the poet is going through with heartbreak... The ending was kind of different, connected with music and ukulele... Well done frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[raven]

haha thank you for trying to make it sound like i did some nice piece here. i really like your writing as well.