April 15, 2017

It's one o'clock in the morning 

and I can hear his voice in my head

over

and over

and over again

He speaks to me in a voice so sweet and smooth

it commands me to listen

His words come out in slow motion

I can see his smile

His cheek dimples on one side of his face

it wrinkles up to his eye so that when he smiles

he squints

His eyes are the color of the sun hitting an autumn leaf 

And they look at me like I am the world

Author's Note

I wrote this pretty early on in my journey of writing.
Still have a long ways to go.

Reviews

[Relic]

The ending really highlights your skill. It's funny how we notice all the little things about someone when we're in love or smitten.

Nice poem. :)

[Ballpark Frank]

I like the title being a date. Thats cool. And i especially like the line about his eyes being like a leaf. Very cool!

[Adam Adams]

The poetry depicts how unconditional your love is. Suchness of heartfelt words i get to see here. Very true, honest, and captivating it is.

[MisterDaddy]

Excellent, a look deep within your own soul, unfathomably beautiful. Reminds me of how I feel about chocolate.