"This Song is my Gift"

Another song I wrote in praise to the One that continually saves my life...

This song is my gift; especially for You,Lord. Taken from my soul,offered with my love. All my praise I lift; in melody with sweet accord, and though it's only part, it's taken from my heart. As my spirit takes its flight, I behold the Throne of Grace. As I soar to brand new heights,I can almost touch Your Face. this is such a holy place. And my joy is real; for my life is living proof. Your Son has made me whole, mercy made Him mine. In this way I feel; basking in my youth renewed, I give You control, of body, spirit, soul. This song is my gift....

Author's Note

Reviews are requested, honesty preferred.
That being said; I despise the genre, the sorting of "religious". Some things do not fit in boxes...

Reviews

[grayhaven]

Truely a wonderful gift to the Father.

[...]

magical poetry
speaks across cultures and religions
a loving submission
is the essence of every religion

[Tasha]

I loved this. Bravo

[WatashLegend]

Honor and love while paying homage to your beliefs, you expressed your thoughts well, bravo!

[Review]

It has a nice spiritual feel to it, although I think it would be easier to read and understand if it looked more like a poem instead of a paragraph.