Loves Prayer

Now I lay my head to sleep.

My heart i give to you to keep.

Should i die before i wake.

 I wish for you my soul to take.

Forgive me of my transgressions.

I regret my decisions.

Lead me not into temptation.

Rather deliver my soul from evil.

For you are my strength,will,and reason.

This I swear forever, in my heart forever.

Good bye and amen.

Author's Note

i dont know i was bord and it popped in.

Reviews

[Missy Lorraine]

I like that it is so straightforward. It reminds me of some of my writing. Not a lot of fancy words and very easy to understand. You rhythm was a little off, but everything alse was really good. And please don't be mad at me for the other reviews I gave on your other poems, you are the one that asked for them...and I was only being honest, just as you should be when reviewing my work.

[Beaner166]

Thank you. And it's no problem. I did ask for them. BTW! You miss spelled else.....

[Missy Lorraine]

Sorry, typo! It happens...you seem to have a lot of them, so you should know.

[Beaner166]

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[Missy Lorraine]

no comment? I thought you would have something to say...

[Missy Lorraine]

By the way, you should capitalize your "i's".

[Beaner166]

I do but a man knows when to hold his tongue when talking to a young lady.

[Missy Lorraine]

HA!! Good for you; You're learning...

[Beaner166]

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[Belle]

You presented your thoughts in a most simple manner.
Very direct without any embelishment.
I had a very good read!

[afra]

good job...keep it up

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most ponting of pieces, you relax the need for clarity and ensure the story, well done, good read.

[WritersSoul]

Hmm,
This is like a tragic love goodbye :(
Sad yet, comforting, Good write :)