Spectator in Time

Short Poem

All this time I just watch it go
Passes me by because I never show
Spectator in time because it’s just too slow




Never tried to live in my own mind
When I look back it was all too kind
It seemed almost like a crime




Sometimes I can’t help but remember home
It reminds me of all the times I should have known
Haven’t helped myself because I just can’t condone




I wonder if they can see me now
Have to move on but I just don’t know how
I keep on trying, but I can only frown

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

Really good write. Has good flow and rhyme. Never tried to live in my mind,really like that line. Good job.

[Matthew]

Thanks for the review man. Glad you liked it. I have a few more that I feel are similar.