The Sonet of Shame

What is the point now?

I feel like going on, but how?

When half of your soul just dies

And it makes you cry once or twice

Shame on me, why am I like this?

Getting rid of something you are not going to miss

Instead of looking for death on the shore

Just take the love and make it more

I hate the way you don't hurt like I do

But who can save me? Who?

What is a pair of socks with just one shoe?

I end every sentence with a question mark

I can weep as easily as a dog can bark

I might kill as easily as a shark

Reviews

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Miss Dias, this was cute beyond belief, I felt like scolding the author for being so hard on herself!

[Zap-the-awesome]

Nooo, don't kill!! It would be hard to write good works from a jailcell, methinks. Good work! X)

[Rebecca Dias]

hahaha thanks

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"What is a pair of socks with just one shoe?"
In my opinion, nothing... But you know, that's just me xD

"I canweep as easily as a dog can bark".
Just separate can and weep and your good! :)

[Rebecca Dias]

Oh thank you for pointing that out! Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate it XD