That girl next to me

This is a short description of one of my best friends. I thought I could describe her in words to train my writing.

Those are not just freckles on a pale face. Those are dots that fell from the clouds to make sure she looked like a doll. Those are not just hands lying on that book. Those are fingers on a palm that can form a fist to show a doll can be a warrior too. Those black diamonds that are lying in between her eyelashes are not just eyes. They are tiny little rocks that can see the world in a whole original way. 

And that bipolar personality is what shows humanity that being balanced is just plain boring. The world should see the greatness between a laugh of joy and a shout of anger. Between a cry of sadness and a scream of fear.

Reviews

[Zap-the-awesome]

Your excellent writing brought a smile to my face. Please, keep it up

[Rebecca Dias]

aww thank you that mean a lot to me!