"Love" found away from home

Away from home ,she looked over the window ,
It was midnight ,the clock tended to strike 12.
She saw hundreds of lanterns over the bluish black sky ,
Her twinkiling eyes couldnt hide her urge to spread her wings .
A drop of tear rolled over her cheek,
This wasn't of unhappiness .
She just knew how happy she was
Seeing the lights in the city of joy.
Still the chaos of the heartless city was tearing her apart.
Turning over she received a tight cosy hug,
From her two sisters she made there in the hostel.
They bid her happy new year ,
A feeling of togetherness;a bond was made so strong .
Then she got to realize home isn't a place ,
It was a feeling she could feel then.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Ah... undoubtedly a very deep story in the phase of poetry. I believe, & of course, do agree that if u got very devoted friends in life, u got paradise ev'n in earth. People having such frnds in life be consider quite blessed so have at it, pretty. Cos.. it's hard to find love & way harder to find faithful frnds. Ah...very deep & so thought-provoking poetry. Gr8 job!

[Sriparna]

Yes ,exactly .I tried to highlight the bond of friendship and sisterhood .even when you are away from your native home ,they can give something to feel complete and homely .thanks for reviewing it .

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your story.
"Then she got to realize home isn't a place ,
It was a feeling she could feel then."
Home is where we feel safe and sound. I like the story and the logic of the story. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sriparna]

You are welcome. Thank you for the review :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[David Marsden]

As I started reading this a feeling of sadness came over me, then the mood lightened, then gloom from the chaos and then the story ended with happiness in the form of love and friendship.
This poem stirs the emotions. It tells of how home is where the heart is. Happiness isn't a place on a map, it's a feeling inside.
You're a deep thinker Sriparna.

[Sriparna]

Thank you very much ,for reviewing it. Glad that you liked .

[Solar]

I like the way you shifted the lonely mood at the start to the human warmth of friendship at the end.

[Sriparna]

Thank you ,very much for reviewing it . :)

[Solar]

You are welcome. Keep writing and also reading others - that way there is growth.

[Sriparna]

Yes , sure . :)