The Waves.

Something the heart shows ,
Something the eyes hide ,
Sometimes the ocean is dark blue ,
But the waves are so high,
Those touch the shore ,
Leave so fast and free ,
Some sees how its letting go ,
Some says beauty of the sea.

Reviews

[Gee]

This, like some I post , has a childlike innocence to it when read aloud with the odd line seemingly there for no reason, if that makes sense.
I enjoyed my visit. Good morning

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

They crash into my sands every day, and I wish they would never go away. Oh how beautiful they are, why do they go so far?

[zunie frost]

Leave so fast and free ,
Some sees how its letting go ,
Some says beauty of the sea.
well said !!
keep writing

[Sriparna]

Surely will. Thank you.

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!

[Emily]

Lovely wording!
Keep up the great work!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice description of the sea. The sea is free and never controlled. Some people are the same. Thank you Sriparna for for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Teja]

The Poem is short but good . But I think you can express more thoughts which could have made the poem look beautiful

[Sriparna]

Sure,I'll try with that . thank you for the review anyway.

[JayG]

Seems a bit disconnected. You open with, " Something the heart shows." You expand in it with "Something the eyes hide"

So there I am, with a riddle, "What is it that the heart shows but the eyes hide?" And I can answer that no more than I can explain why a raven is like a writing desk, so I'm waiting for more clues. But instead you talk about the color of the ocean.

Words you have, but because I lack context to make them meaningful...

[Sriparna]

Hey ,I got you.The ocean and the waves are mentioned to mean something more than a literal meaning. Hope I can entertain you with better ones in future . Thank you for the review anyway.:)

[Dayran]

I am wondering about the person standing at the ocean's edge. I wonder what she thinks.