"Idol Worship"

it oozed out of pure love.

"Idol Worship"

Dedicated to "Zebunissa Makhfi"

Act 0

Pagan desires composed a wild symphony,
reading her pink bra that sharply scoffed.
Erupting signals from her candy knees,
raptured the ecstasy of her loose, back cut, top.
Nothingness tapped me out of this tipsiness,
as an atonement, for my strange heartbeats.

And yet the pleasure of tasting her aroma,
nonchalantly belongs to her childish will.
Evermore her heart will double beat,
juggling safely, into the frames of my life.
And then I shall die, a happy man.

Reviews

[Erin]

Just to let you know -- first thing I've ever read from you.
Word choice + vocabulary (woooooow) + Allusions + Fluency = this is really good, I usually don't say that for the first thing I ever read. This is really good actually, which I've already said, but I'll say it for a third time as well -- this is really good. I'm reading more from you. My read requests can wait.
PBP

[GTVile]

Wow! I really liked this. It seriously drips with passion. Excellent job!

[Emily B]

purest love, beautifully written

[Moonflower]

Lovely. The ending was perfect. :)

[emmah]

ah - as much is hidden as is revealed - as much is said as is silenced - as much is obvious as is not - as much is cherished as is left - as much is glazed as is matte - love it - love the layers - love the mystery - love the end!!!

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. insha-allah! ... bohot khoob ... these images are new shades of crimson and white ... a treat ... for sure ...

[Bubo]

Mouth watering.........I could love her myself...........the imagery is stunning, and the wonder evident, I loved each word.