This is your daughter....

A poem about insecurity. Who are you supposed to go to when there's no one there?

This is your daughter 

This is your daughter Leslie

Can you here me?

Are you there? 

 

Creator, this is your daughter Tsun-nay lhaat

My soul is here for you to see

I ask for your guidance

for this life I don't know if I can lead

I ask for your guidance

to keep my mind and spirit strong. 

 

Creator, this is your daughter Leslie

My heart is here for you to see

I ask for your hand

to heal these wounds I don't deserve 

I ask for your hand 

to hold for mere company 

 

Creator, is it ok if I've doubted you

Is it ok if still doubt you

i don't know if your there

 

Creator, this is your daughter Tsun-nay lhaat 

Can you answer to my new prayer?

Author's Note

i dont think this is a very technically accurate poem. but its real

Reviews

[Isolophobe]

Nice. Makes me think of an eminem line "I pray that god answers, maybe I'll ask nicer"

Good poem, I enjoyed it.

[~amanda~]

super cool! i love it because its so unique to you. i could never write something like that! i love the line "to heal these wounds i dont deserve" so poetic and deep... i really liked this poem... keep up the good work!

[Wicahpi]

"Is it ok if (i) still doubt you
i don't know if your there"

you know what, doesn't have to be technically accurate, just keep it real!
real......is a good thing! emotions, prayers are not technically accurate, ever!
right?

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