FAP #6: Just Thinking..

okay, okay, so I'm in a rut... but it's nice here...

FAP #6:   Just Thinking...

Why is it

in twilight’s last flicker,

I am able to elicit

the wonderment

and glimmer

found in the brown glow

of your eyes?

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It’s amazing really,

the way you ebb and flow,

on the evening’s shadows;

casting magic’s shimmering

burgundy flavors

as you dance and sway

into my heart.

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In truth,

I never had a chance.

Nor did I want one.

I just love

thinking about you.

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~~redzone 12.22.14

Author's Note

thanks for reading... Came across this "Londonbeat" song and well it lead me by the hand to "thinking"''.....

Reviews

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Sometimes love is like that ... Never giving us a fighting chance before it takes over our heart. Your beautiful words would make any girl sigh. So lovely, Red. :)

[redzone]

thanks Kalypso, love should be like this, where just thinking about them makes you laugh, dance and sing... nope, no chance at all... ;0)

[AprilRN1210]

the depth of romance in this one is deceiving.. it feels light and sweet, then it hits you!.. BaM!... left me sitting here going awwww, I want that... beautiful my friend... absolutely beautiful... love the descriptive, rich use of language and imagery to express those heartfelt emotions..

[redzone]

And the "BAM" is just so much fun April ... warm and cuddly even.. wait did I just say that... Oh no.. smitten!!! ;0)

[Lydia Shutter]

Nope, you never had a chance. When those burgundy flavors kiss your lips and glimmers of brown bore into your soul, you are just gone....smitten in the nicest of ways! :) The humor you injected into this one is sweet, Curt. No sense to fight it. When Cupid takes aim, it's all over! Lyhdi**

[redzone]

Gone and never returning Lydi, how could it be otherwise.. nope, no chance.. thanks Lydi for seeing the fun in being "smitten"... and for enjoying my little write d

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"i never had a chance"

doomed from the start to be smitten...

this is a fun and romantic piece.

[redzone]

and I had fun writing it too... thanks Jacob... nope not even close to a wisp of a chance... funny how that is isn't it??