Butterfly Flutter

Butterfly Flutter

The music swirls Cherry Blossoms,

pink petals fluttering in the air

as if plucked by morning notes

and you glide in dawn’s sweet touch

like a slow butterfly song.

Break down:

hey hey baby

come come 

my lady

are you a butterfly

all fluttery sweet

and crazy down,

maybe you’ll dance with me

tonight.

Flip side:

this fusion, hard rock

and hip-hop

swirls cherry blossom petals

fluttering in your crazy breeze

of sweet tasting

butterfly notes.

Baby baby 

you are a

sweet buttefly song

playing

dancing

in my heart...

Come come

my lady

and I will help you sing.

Aztec Warrior/redzone 8.27.16

Note: I drew heavily on the song by Crazy Town, “Butterfly”

the song embedded below. 

Author's Note

...thanks for reading...

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love the way you've shown us the "soft" side & also the "harder" side of the butterfly dance here . . . I was taken in from start to finish, feeling the way it can be when there's a fusion of natural observations combined with heartfelt interactions, dancing & song usually a part of such an equation with you. I can feel the jazzy spirit of your musical inclinations in between the lines (((HUGS)))

[Lydia Shutter]

Butterflies...now you KNOW I just loved the poem right from the start. The breeze of butterfly wings....sensual and a bit seductive. What sweeter song than the ones butterflies sing? I liked the flirtatious attitude in this one, Curt. I could almost see the cherry blossoms blooming as I read your "nice" words. Wonderful! Lydi**

[redzone]

hi Lydi, "come my lady, sugar"...

thanks Lydi I am thrilled you liked fluttering with these butterflies... and gave such nice review...

[Lydia Shutter]

Dancing to a song like this would end up in a strip tease....or more!

[redzone]

9f you want I will keep my eyes closed.. er.. well maybe... not on your life Lydi... lol... dance away... ;0)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"hey baby, won't you take a chance, c'mon let's do this dance"

chances...we don't know outcomes, but giving love a chance...that is the key to two butterflies being able to float away on the breeze, together.

j.

[redzone]

sounds right to me Jacob... go for it... ;0)

thanks for the visit and the kind words Jacob..

[Papaya]

I remember this song and I love how you've transformed it into something sweet and edgy.

[redzone]

hey Papaya... HI and thanks... trying to catch up on posts here today but wanted to post the ones that I wrote today... they needed to get out of my head... lol... thurs night I was listening to and downloading some of my CDs and these poems came gushing out...

I love when you visit and happy you remembered the song and read this poem... ;0)

[Papaya]

You're welcome. Always a pleasure.