Love Sonnet XXXV (Part3)

....a new dawn

Love Sonnet XXXV (Part 3)

 

 

At the break of day, we

fade into dreams of

chocolate lakes and fields

of blueberry blossoms that

 

color the wind with hope.

Hope that the nightmares will

end, that our Earth will

become whole again, and

 

humanity will once again

listen to the wind whisper

to the leaves, that we will talk

 

to wolves, run wild with the deer,

sing whale songs, and open

our eyes to a new world.

 

Aztec Warrior/ redzone 2.12.25

Author's Note

....thanks for reading

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

A very thoughtful and hopeful sonnet...but I wonder if this could happen...Hope does not spring eternal these days...it is hanging by a thread.
Nicely done,
j.

[redzone]

Jacob, thank you! I don't think we humans will ever lose HOPE. It is why HOPE is so dangerous, especially in opposing tyrants and self-centered people. But keeping HOPE take courage and sacrifice. It requires that not only do we come to see the possibilities of a different world, but that we actively fight for it. The conditions for HOPE, for a better world already exists, but it up to us to see it, not in the abstract of wishful thinking, but in the reality of working to make it truly alive. I believe whole heartedly that we humans are capable of great things but we need the visionary approach and leadership to do this. This we do have and why I have HOPE.

I am honored by your comment and that you found it 'hopeful'.

[Sami Khalil]

An amazing poem with a universal message for humanity. I like how you color things with hope; how you write worthy poems.

[redzone]

Sir Sami, knight of poetry, and friend, it is always good when you read one of my poems and leave such high praise. Wasn't HOPE the last of the things that flew out of Pandora's box? How could HOPE be anyting but coloful? After all, our world, its inhabitance, our lives are filled with color, if we act to make it our reality. All things depend on what we humans do. And This depends on a HOPE that unleashes the best of our nature, don't you think.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well articulated. You are welcome my friend.