Love Sonnet XLV

LOVE SONNET XLV

 

 

Your lips spit fire, yet taste

like Chardonnay warmed by the heat

of a poem written on a summer day.

A natural red allows

 

your words, a sensual touch and

flavor as they caress my skin in a

kaleidoscope of colors, each one

shifting, reflecting like a psithurism,

 

like a soft rustling of leaves, felt

on my anticipating lips. Your kiss

excites the blood in my veins

 

giving me goosebumps of desire.

Such is the taste and nature

of your lips of fire.

 

Aztec Warrior / redzone 7.16.2025

Author's Note

....thanks for reading

Reviews

[Relic]

Hot kisses are great. Your poetic descriptions really delve deep into the feelings that can arouse a man when he's in the throes of passion with the woman he loves and admires.

Well done. :)

[Chris Shaw]

I had to read a second time and slowly. I got lost in the moment here. Your third stanza, particularly sensual. Tantalizing even. You have written a wonderful love sonnet here. Be proud. I’m also a Springsteen fan. Enjoyed my visit. Thank you.

Chris

[redzone]

Chris, HI! First, yes, Springsteen is one of the best!! His songs and concerts are so vibrant, with lots of emotional color. And, second, THANK YOU so much for your comment. And, I am happy that you enjoyed your visit. You are always welcome here, anytime.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much.

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Ahh! What a great song chose to your beautiful poem. They match perfectly! Your words warmed my heart... So sensual. I miss writing love poems! I miss feeling this! Thanks to your poems, they still keep the fire in my heart alive. And the song!!

[redzone]

AWWWE! What a special review, Beren. Thank you falls short of what it means to me. Perhaps, and I for one hope so, you will write love poems again. I think they would burn down this website with their soft, yet passionate display of words, feel and touch. I, for one, would never fear the fire that these love poems would create. Perhaps one day, when your heart is ready.

Thanks again, Beren