Love Sonnet LI

Love Sonnet LI

A Poem by redzone
"

....a bit of fantasy

"

Love Sonnet LI

 

 

In the land of Winken, Blinken, and Nod,

where dragons flew, and unicorns trod,

I walked with you hand in hand,

where the sea caressed the sand.

 

In this time of childhood innocence,

we watched clouds of rabbits with fluffy scents

sail across a wondrous blue,

and I knew then, I would always love you.

 

As we age and think on our delight,

let us reminisce this love so right

as we giggled and held each other tight.

 

My love, long after we are gone, seen through 

morning mist and fog, unicorns and dragons roam 

in the land of Winken, Blinken, and Nod.

 

Aztec Warrior / redzone 8.26.2025

© 2025 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
....thanks for reading

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It sounds as though love has outlasted the years. In this uncertain world, that's more than many can say.

Posted 7 Months Ago


I am not sure exactly why but this fun poem reminds me of the first girl I ever kissed...I was her first as well...my best friend and this girl's twin sister set us up for it. From what I remember it was quite pleasant...at least for me; she might have a totally different view.
j.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Warrior, to assist me in my writes, I have tons of aunt G's files to access. Sorry I can't give you what I have in mind.
Oh, Curt, to be the fantasy is an absolute dream of mine, every time I enter that land of Winken, Blinken, and Nod, you are magically there.
I fear I've over stepped my bounds.
Beautiful, piece you've created for someone.
E.R.H.

Posted 7 Months Ago


I am a big fan of fantasy - recently finished The Last Unicorn by Peter S. Beagle - was pleasantly surprised by the level of writing as I thought it would be much more juvenile than it was - with that frame of reference your work seemed to fit right in - your piece was pure pleasure to read - carl

Posted 7 Months Ago



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