First Lie Wins

....10 reasons

First Lie Wins

 

 

A love poem if I ever saw one:

1)     I hate you

2)     yes I do.

3)     You are ugly

4)     and shaped like a gord

5)     a big bottom girl

6)     with humongous breasts.

7)     I don’t understand

8)     why you hate me too.

9)     Somewhere it’s raining,

10) but cold and snowy here.

 

Aztec Warrior / redzone 8.29.2025

 

Note: A bit of explanation. ‘First Lie Wins’ is the title of a book I saw on line. 

  It was a murder mystery, but my warped mind saw the potential for love. 

  I know Curt has gone off the deep end once again.

Author's Note

....thanks for reading

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Reminds me of the movie, Ten Things I hate about You---

[redzone]

Thanks Jacob, you know that movie came to mind as I wrote this. It was a good movie too.

[Ms claws]

I love the video! I wish we could create LIFE like that...Cut and decorated to our specifications. The music was so pretty.
Your poem: First Lie Wins
It rings true.
Reminds me of an old friend.
You haven't gone off the deep end. You have a very creative mind! (warped is good sometimes ;-)
Thanks for the Explanation, Aztec Warrior/redzone.

[redzone]

Thank you, Eternity. Well maam, if you think warped is sometimes a good thing, you are more than welcome to join me in the deep end... LOL Let the imagination and creativity begin!!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is so vreative, and hilarious

[redzone]

Thanks Dale for your visit, happy that you ewnjoyed the poem.