Rain always does this to me

Rain feels... good.

caresses my hair..

strikes my head...

touches my fingers..

reaches deep.. pulls in..

breathes on my soul..

 

I slip.. slide.. grasp..

My head hits..

My soul breaks..

On concrete.. on reality.

Reviews

[Kelley]

Great write Anna! I love the rain.


Kelley

[Jenny-Jen-Jen]

Beautiful.
Simply gorgeous piece.
In few words, you managed to capture wonderful meaning.
Well done :]

[Becca]

Yoiks. Very few words, but a striking story is woven within.
Literally.
Well done!