All temporary...?

Temporarily disconnected...

I wait on the other line... waiting... not knowing what to expect... knowing i should be answering..

If only..

I could travel through the phone...

Be there..

For one last day...

To see him...To see her...

To see my home... My love...

For her waters to engulf me in her arms one last time...

For her sun to caress my body...

For her moon to make me feel whole...

Sitting... Waiting... Wishing..

I wish..

For time to stop... To be endless...

Temporarily Disconnected...

................... me

Reviews

[Silvario]

wow, very nice. i really enjoyed this piece. a very strong, urning message written with obvious talent. i loved the structure you chose and the pace and flow as well.

i believe we've all been there, on the other line ... wanting so badly to actually be there. you captured it beatifully and quite powerfuly.

well doone indeed :)