Want or Need...?

Want

            The need deep within each of us

Some afraid

Some courageous

Grab

Tear

Hold onto

Each soul

Unique

As one

As two

Different

Together

In the moment

Passion

Erotic

Sensuality

Your hands

On my thighs

As we press into the wall

Harder

Into one

 

Finally we are joined

Feeling an undying closeness

As your lips connect into my soul

Your hands still holding the strength

The sensation

Begins to slow

As we pull away

Our tanks empty

Swim to the surface

Sigh

 

 

The look in his eyes

Deep breath

 

Dive in

 

 

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

wow! this is what i was looking for tonight! different," and the way it is shown on here is perfect! one word cascading into another.....great effect! loved this...unique style....great, emotion-packed words.....hits the spot for me definitely! passionate....."our tanks empty, swim to the surface"....great lines......well done!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When love and lust collide there is no greater feeling... a beautiful poem, very visual emotionally and physically.