only 5 days...

only 5 days...

A Poem by A

5 days

144 hours

8640 seconds

short time

filled with expectations

happiness

unknown alterations

endings

beginnings

how can 5 days

ruin your chances

crush your soul 

slowly crack your heart

how can my stupidity 

ruin everything

not thinking

just doing

5 days

filled with empty promises 

broken dreams

endings

please let me start over

let these 5 days be nothing

more than forgotten days

forgiven memories

and beginnings 

created

from the endings

© 2011 A


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I enjoyed the flow, the wording, nice work

Posted 13 Years Ago
Wow. Just think what 6 days could have done! This really captures the events.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent. :) Leaves plenty of room for interpretation, which I like. Beautiful display of emotion.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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 Added on October 13, 2011
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