Lifeless

My words you don’t believe

My questions you won’t answer

As each piece slowly became clearer

each part of my being

slowly became paralyzed

now I’m stuck

I’m numb

frozen

lifeless

your forgiveness 

is the only thing

that can melt my heart

frozen in time

waiting

for 

You

Reviews

[julespinkyd]

To forgive is divine. To hold something over someone... is just being an a*s. Stay golden, not frozen.

[Eagle Cruagh]

It is time , Anna
Time to have you recognized for
the womderful, talent you are.
People who keep you waiting '
should be side-lined ---- You come
first.
---- John

[Daniel DeLorez]

Love this. :) Short, sweet, and to the point. My only complaint is how you repeated the word "numb." Still, it's an easy fix.

[Ourebro.]

Love the font. How'd you get it?
Very nice structural focus and flow.

[Poeticpiers]

sad beyond sadness Why wait for something which may never happen.Time to move on