My Bitter End

what leads to my bitter end?

My Bitter End

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         My restlessness

                               -My enemy

         My happiness

                                -My friend

         But both shall be

My Bitter End.

Reviews

[☾Panda☽]

Ooh really cool I love your short poem. You are some amazing Poet

Sincerely Panda

[NeiL ArandA]

Yep that's how life rolls . It's like a railroad tracts . Side by side on each side . We experience both ends .

[FelicityAllona]

Short but very deep. :) Great job! :))

[Tina Kline]

Wow, very good poem. This has a deep and rather profound feeling to it. It very well could be true for many.

[Ahmad Cox]

Nice. I like the flow of this poem.

[}Echo{]

This is cool, different from what you usually write, and shorter, but I like it. :)