Vision Of You

A vision of someone i love

Vision Of You

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I close my eyes to see

Nothing but a figure of beauty

With an elegant dress of white

Moving towards me

With a face of radiant light

Eyes that spark in the night

Walking so graciously

Such a gorgeous sight

Now she stands before me

Gives me a kiss of sympathy

Then, I open my eyes to see

That You are here no more

Author's Note

Hope you like it. Its been a while since i've written a love poem. Also, this is my first love poem posted in writerscafe

Reviews

[FelicityAllona]

This is great Kyle. Though short and simple, it is sweet. :))

Uhm...
"Then, I open my eyes to see
That You are here no more with me"

It's just a suggestion. :))

[NeiL ArandA]

I see . I had a crush one time and she is so drop dead georgeous . Sometimes i would gaze and stare at her for hours it she'll let me . And she caught me . Busted . It's really embarrassing . So Ilearned how to admire and love someone from a distance . Good piece Kyle .

[Ahmad Cox]

Very pretty and sweet

[Lost in Wonderland]

awww:( Such a lovely, bittersweet poem. I loved it Kyle!!!

[Kyle Sky]

Thanks a lot.

[Lost in Wonderland]

No problem

[Hannah Jocks]

good poem(: I like it. It gave me chills...

[}Echo{]

I like this, is really cool, and suspenceful. Keep writing! :)