Angel of Darkness

A little something from my youth

The scorching flames upon my back, 
hands are bleeding, dry and cracked. 
The burning glow of satan's face, 
takes me to a darker place, 
where demons live and devils grow, 
A place where i have died to know. 
The scorching flames turn into wings, 
I pledge my soul to fallen kings.. 
My bleeding hands ignite your fear, 
my only duty is to bring you here. 
The years in life you made me lose, 
is why i've come to conquer you. 
I'll die and rot inside your mind, 
your mortal fate will be declined. 
I'm here to bring you down with me, 
eye for an eye in death for thee. 
To burn and swell in immortal hell 
consuming time within fate's cell 
because all you've done and all you've said

is the reason WE are truely dead. 

Reviews

[KeeD]

Besides a spelling mistake and some grammar this piece is great, It's the genre of poems I love to read the most. I look forward to reading more of your stuff this was great. I've been working on a series of Dark Poems related to a 15year old Girl who has been possessed. I'm almost done with part 4 and 5 if you'd like to check it out maybe we could work on a series together about something horrifically deviant in the future. :) Great Write, a true fan.

[revalatia]

Heck yeah.. i'll totally check that out.. collaboration would be a fun little project me thinks ;)

[MOON]

A dark lovely write like the flow .

[Becky C Strukamp]

I interpreted as an eye for an eye! Excellent poem!

[Angel]

I really like this, I love dark poems. :) It's really good! 100/100

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A dark and satanic piece that flows poetically and in rhyme.

[Dr. Wood ?]

lots of revenge in a nasty way....The best kind in a dark world

[Sacha Davison]

a few corrections to be made
"my soul duty is to bring you here" i believe should be "sole", although i suppose i could be wrong.
a great piece just needs minor revision. great job, once again! :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

fantastic meter and rhyme. A peom of revenge, very well done.

[Pax]

darkness and its core... very vivid and graphic you painted in words...
its a burning feeling.
great work!

[revalatia]

thank you.. one of my first poems I think I was 15..

[Pax]

your most welcome!