Deserted Territory

....I edited this piece to include some some of my 'other family' ....and ..well yeah that's about it. .......

I'm reaching out for answers ..but its they I cannot find
I feel as if they've gone, and have left me far behind...

I never meant my silence, to seem as though I'm cold
If I had been able, the world I would have told.

haunted by the thought of not seeing you today
and angered by the roadblocks, as their tearing me away.

I thought I knew myself. Upon def ears I spill my soul
Not thinking for a moment, that their absence was the toll.

Give me time to tell you, all the things I need to say
and please don't take away the smiles,
I have borrowed for today.

Author's Note

...and that's my daily dose of emo :P

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Life is a constant journey to find peace and proper place.
"Give me time to tell you, all the things I need to say
and please don't take away the smiles,
I have borrowed for today."
The above lines. Realistic place to know. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[revalatia]

..and thank you very much for reading. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed your work and you are welcome.

[Scotch mist.]

Such a beautiful last line so wonderfully capturing the true meaning of friendship. Sad, reflective, but most importantly beautiful and from the heart.

[??????]

Wow this was a very speaking write from the heart.It's sad people can't see us for who we are and they leave yet were wondering in all the whys. I really loved it because I see it as real. Allow time to mend better things always come remember that. Your a very powerful writer I always enjoy your words:)

[Effector Prime]

Give me time to tell you, the things I need to say

Damn right! This is one hell of a poem. GREAT work :D