Karmatic Plot

Just keeping it as real as i can ...

Sighing at the thought
of silent warfare never fought
starting with delusions I had brought
by connecting unseen dots
...and tying clues and words in knots.
exploring worlds that warn me not.
It's just another lesson taught:
Should we question what we've got?
Losing something never sought-
a love that cannot be forgot.
My soul left seemingly distraught.

-This is what his absence brought.

Reviews

[emipoemi]

You have an intriguing knack for pulling off poems written with only one rhyme. Well done!

[Mr. Lopez]

Wow, this was absolutely fantastic. Filled with spite and anger, confusion and pain. And so cleverly composed. The rhyming was crafty as well. I promise to read more of your work. Well done.

[revalatia]

Thank you very much for checking it out! :)

[Johnny]

good piece, I really like it, but I notice a pattern, you focus on the last word to create your rhyme, focus more on syllables rather than words and you will start to see the little pieces that create a poem, I stick to the same content, however I bounce between structure and freestyle and with different overtones as if someone else could have written it, but by no means is this sub-par, 100pnts