Being unite

All around world the people go serious,
And i see them with puzzled furious;
They with the others progress  getting jealous,
so the word disappearing is us us us !!

The engraved golden ring of fraternity,
With the embedded stone of humanity,
Everyone shall wear it with a affinity,
Lets all be happier with unity!!

Reviews

[Nightfall]

what the passion you've got fella.......your writing way/your rhyming look alike me indeed....you'r writing is i think a damn good acc. to mah way..fella.....yu know what, you should have to write some more, i'd really read your way too....hey fella....i liked your tittle & your `~unity" as we;;ll...

If you'll write more than you can grow~up more...but, i read only short one's alike above...so, write poetry's in a limited way..i loved your writing way too fella.......

You've a talen i think...why you don't write some more....in a passionable way....you gotta fire buddy...i think, you're too a nice rhymer as like me...hey...have you ever made any kinda song....sssss?????//////

[pearl]

yea...thank u...my collections are in my Diary...lazy to winde the pages...and i dont like to see my profile balnk :-/ ..so wrote in a couple of mins...once again thanks for your review :)

[Nightfall]

i think i'd asked a ques. to ya ?

[pearl]

no i didnt make any kinda of that..let me try in future :P

[Nightfall]

ok...go for it fella...!!