The music

once I heard His voice so tenderly
I ignored and moved further
He glided behind me as a breeze
The only way I can feel where he is.

The happier days had gone with him
So as the bitter days as when
He tried to put a curve in my lips
He made me cry or even to get freak.

He is my company when I left most alone
He is the one whom I search when I've all
He is everything that i needs to be and
He is nothing but my soul of life.





 

Reviews

[Nightfall]

Hey...it's really made b yya.it's a nice piece...yu're growing now...reaching out.....but don't ya think that the tittle should be "Soul of life" rather than "The Music..."...sorry, if you did hurt i said what i felt b your writing....

[pearl]

I'm describing about the music..I personified Music here ...so to understand i gave the title as "The music" and sub line as 'soul of life' :)

[Nightfall]

ok...but this's you know only, not the other one...it's you write you this tittle "Soul of life"...then it' could b quite impreessive to read, everyone 'd keen to read this.....anyway.....it's your decision...what you do like....i said as a frnd....to notify you about this ...................!!

[pearl]

sure :)