I've Got A Sister (lessons in love)

i've got a sister
whose love's worth more 
than an acre of diamonds

than all the corn
in kansas

whose love is 
greater than all the water in the sea

and we most always disagree
in fact she is three

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i wish my sister would go back to being three...i have a sister and wish i didn't...

a really fun read...i relate...in a different way...and don't usually read stories, but your story about sports in the schools...or should i say "spots" really gave me a smile...

i grew up in the Bronx...lived there till i was nine...on Sedgwick Avenue by the Harlem and two miles from Yankee stadium...so i felt that one, and this one...
thanks

j.

[Robert Filos]

Thanks man I don't read many things anymore myself, spent 50 years reading and now I write...as the old blues man once said "it;s in me and it's gotta come out" peace... oh yeah I grew up in Parkchester. the south near westchester square

[James Whitefall]

I like how she seems older and on your level until the ending. Nice conclusion. Thanks for the read.

[Robert Filos]

no one has caught it yet, so I must confess, it is that I have three sisters!

[James Whitefall]

Nice. I'm going to have to read it a few times.