Traits of the Fey

Demonically sinister 

Angelically fair 

Such are the traits of the Fey 

Pale pale skin 

Luminescent wings 

Cold cold eyes 

Twisted smiles 

Such are the traits of the Fey 

Earning your trust 

Then quickly betraying it 

Supporting your needs 

Then stabbing you in the back 

Such are the traits of the Fey 

They are visible 

But not tangible 

These malicious creatures 

Are your dark side 

Whispering treacherous words 

Corrupting your judgement 

Flitting inside your own soul 

Such are the traits of the Fey

Reviews

[Felecia]

All of it true. In my eye's anyway. You could say I'm a Fae expert (well not really...I've just read a LOT of books about them) They are deceptive, trust stealing, beautiful and horrifying all at the same time. They're all pretty much like this, it's in their nature, but not all of them will stick to their behavours.
Wondeful poem! Love it

[Rhea752]

Thank you!!! :D

[Celestial Witch Child]

So descriptive. I love it.

[Angelic_Dreamer]

I liked it but I'll admit at first I was confused but that was until I read the comments and reread the first few lines.:)

[Rhea752]

thx :P

[Angelic_Dreamer]

Ur Welcome:)

[Priscilla Sayers]

What a wonderful piece! The battle of the demons that reside within.... Bringing us to acknowledge the darkness within us all. Nicely done!

[Rhea752]

YES!!!! i think you are the first one to comment regarding the fact that the fey were the demons inside of us. it was what i was going for. i'm glad you saw it.

[Priscilla Sayers]

me too:)

[Pax]

great work.
i really like these lines:
Demonically sinister
Angelically fair
Such are the traits of the Fey
Pale pale skin
Luminescent wings
Cold cold eyes

the rhyme is so good.

[Rhea752]

thx :)

[Jordan A. Wilson]

stabbing you in the back doesn't quite match the diction in the rest of the piece. other than that good work.

[Amanda]

Creepy...
The only fey I done heard about is Sookie Stackhouse and she only got mind reading and microwave fingers. Wouldn't be surprised if there be fey that are really like this. Keep it up

[Rhea752]

Thank you :)

[Owlgirl]

Wow, this is exceptional. I love the dark tone of it all, the amazing imagery and description of the Fey. Beautiful enchantment once again :)

[Heromen Selena]

Love it! You're getting really good at your poems. Keep it up!

[Rhea752]

thank you :)

[F.P. Chat]

I love this...you know my fairies are like that! Excellent...

[Rhea752]

thx :D