REANNA

This is for my Best Friend.

R 

E 

A 

N 

N 

A 

No!!

What am I doing? 

An acrostic 

Is like a half-assed try. 

No.

I don't think it ever could explain 

Our sisterly bond. 

My best friend 

Deserves better than this, 

But how can I express 

What our friendship is like. 

But wait,

I don't have to,

Because you already know.

Author's Note

The picture is of my best friend Reanna. so this is supposed to be part of my best friends birthday present. i want to know if i should give it to her or just scratch it and start over. i am blocking rating but only because i don't want her present to be graded. sorry. so tell me what you think :D

-Rhea752

Reviews

[Felecia]

Omg loooved the beginning, it made me laugh aha. Very nice poem! I bet your friend is glad to have you as her sisterly friend ^.^

[BorealPoet]

Love the beginning. It was like. Hey wait a minute what the @$#@# am I doing?! Great job!

[Aehr]

aww.. She'll love it!

[Tai Ryens]

A lovely gift indeed, the beginning was rather humorous considering you started with an acrostic and finished with this. It makes me ponder whether you planned the poem to be this way or if it just happened. I like it.

[Sarah W. French]

I really like it!!!

[MOON]

It's lovely a great gift.

[F.P. Chat]

You should definitely give it to her, smoothly said indeed!

[Leave me alone....]

aww this is sweet, love the last line :) and your friend is sooooo pretty~ ^^

[Rhea752]

Reanna is amazing. I'm the lucky one, to be her friend.

[Hannah Olivia]

I wish my best friend would do this for me! I like the last line, 'Because you already know', and how it's italicized. Awww :3

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

I like it. I think it could be longer, maybe. I'm sure your friend will like anything you've written for her. :-)