Lost Thoughts

Haha, writers block.

Lost in the deep tides 

In the dark waves of Lost Thoughts 

And Oceans of Time

Author's Note

I wrote this a few months ago

Reviews

[Angelic_Dreamer]

Its very short:( I expected to read more but other than that it was interesting.

[Rhea752]

oh... Well it was a haiku... It was only supposed to be 3 lines long :/ thank you for the review :)

[Angelic_Dreamer]

ur welcome and thanks for telling me that:)

[Felecia]

It's short and lovely! I love it. It's perfect and captures such raw emotion. Very nicel. Love it.

[Erin Thomas]

I love this so much!!! It perfectly captures how I feel, all of us for that matter, when I have writers block! Great work!!!

[Rhea752]

Thanks :P

[Jordan A. Wilson]

i like haikus, especially this one

[BorealPoet]

Beautiful! Just beautiful!

[Amila Jay]

Beautiful write :))

[Heromen Selena]

Loved Oceans of Time. I don't know exactly why....I just do :)

[F.P. Chat]

I am not an expert on poetry so I don't really identify teh different styles but I can say that I find a lot of meaning in these three lines. Goor job

[Falling Leaf.]

Great! Although I would consider this 5-7-5 and not a haiku--it's not strictly abotu nature, and I'm quite peculiar about my Oriental poetry-- it's still lovely all the same, and we can all relate.

[Rhea752]

I believe this poem is a Senryu which is a poem that is in the form of a haiku but it is about human nature. Thank you for the reviews :)

[Falling Leaf.]

Oh yes, that's the word for it. Good job, and it's no trouble at all!

[Aehr]

loved it!!! an awesome haiku... and yes, a writers block is really irritating, but sometimes its worth the wait :)