Bound

Why did you choose me 

To be the outcast of your tribe 

The center of your gibes 

Made me no longer free 

Chained me down 

With mocking words 

Boxed me up with boards 

So you could feel like a crown

Manipulated my feelings

Using cruel dour sounds 

with rope I am bound 

And Hope no longer sings 

I don't know which is worse 

Staying here by my own will 

Or caught in the chill 

Every word comes out as a lie, forced 

I wish I could end this happily

But I'm not gonna lie 

Almost every day I cry

'Cause in those words the truth I see

Reviews

[Angelic_Dreamer]

The way you throw interesting descriptions together makes you a better writer by the minute!!:) I like your poem and I hope to read more of your poems.

[Rhea752]

thank you very much!!!

[Angelic_Dreamer]

Ur welcome keep up the awesome work with ur poems:)

[Secret Lullaby]

wow I love ALL your work!!!! I can relate to SOO much!!(:

[Rhea752]

Thank you very much :D

[Secret Lullaby]

No Problem(;

[MOON]

Emotional sad write well conveyed like the title expalins the poem so well.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Great emotions, well expressed. Quite an intriguing take on the concept as well...nice job.

[Felecia]

It was a very nice poem, could use some tweaking here and there though, but over all, pretty good

[Heromen Selena]

Oooo. The last line mixed up the sentence structure. You could've chosen to do "cause I see in those words the truth" or "cause I see the truth in those words" but no. I like it. Nice job.

[Rhea752]

Yeah it is pretty screwed up but if i did your suggestions the a-b-b-a rhyme scheme would be messed up :/ Thank You for pointing that out though :)

[Heromen Selena]

Oh I was trying to say that I liked the sentence!! haha oops :) I forgot to make that clearer. It's lovely.

[Rhea752]

oh... haha i fail :P

[Heromen Selena]

Haha no i didn't make it clear :/ it's cool.

[Tai Ryens]

Interesting work, though it could use a bit of tweaking in my opinion.

[Amanda]

I really like this, great work as usual :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

this poem is great and full of emotional
like this poem :)

[Rhea752]

... That was quick, Thank you for the review

[Irvette Dauphine]

haha.. i have no job here >.>
can you please check my photos??