White Snow

Snow whips in cold tendrils around me

Creating an ever moving blanket of solace

Nothing penetrates the heavy silence

Frost bites into my heart

Numbing what the novocaine couldn't

A winter day all about me

A pillar of salt wrapped in snow

White ice embracing me 

And I forget everything

Every sin and heartache

Every day I've lived

An eternity of nothing

Think what you will

But I can't hear you while I'm held

In this white death

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

To write about the unhappy veil of depression that repeatedly withdraws you from those you love; I daresay you were clever with this one. Imagery was enticing, and using the metaphor of being trapped in an frozen wasteland was something I hardly see, as most writers tend to write of the suffering happened in there.

[Rhea752]

thank you Tai :D

[Falling Leaf.]

Ciao,

Very poignant and hearwrenching. I agree strongly with Tai, this is a metaphor rarely seen and the imagery was exquisite. Superb write.

Arrivederci!

[InsanityWriter]

So descriptive. :) Awesome imagery. ^_^

[Rhea752]

thank you :)