Happiness

Happiness is a faded memory 

Blurred by a rainy day 

Blocked by a see through wall

And remembering isn't enough

I want to touch it 

Feel it 

Dive into it's enveloping warmth 

But I can't even feel my bruised fingers

From the constant pounding 

All I know is that wall will break 

And I'll be the one to shatter it

Reviews

[Aly Jones]

Really heartfelt. It was a dark contrast to what one would assume from the title, which I liked. Added a bit of unpredictablity to your works. I especially like these lines:

"I want to touch it
Feel it
Dive into it's enveloping warmth"

Powerful stuff right there. :)

[Rhea752]

Thank you very much:)

[Aly Jones]

You're welcome. :)

[Tai Ryens]

What a grim outlook of happiness; which makes me love it all the more.

[Rhea752]

Thx :D

[C.C. Marx]

Sometimes on a seriously crappy day, I question my happiness. But then, I see that faint glimmer of light. Don't stop searching for it. Nicely penned

[Rhea752]

Thx:)

[C.C. Marx]

Your very welcome :)