Mama

She never could 

Hold me close

Cradle me like a mother would

I loved her

But she didn't love me

Reviews

[ROSALIND]

I really can relate to this few words but say's it all

[Rhea752]

Thx :)

[Tai Ryens]

Unrequited love to the point of literal darkness. 'Tis a shame many have to deal with this.

[Rhea752]

Thank you :)

[C.C. Marx]

Short but its got a serious OMPH, ya know? nice write

[Rhea752]

Thanks :)

[C.C. Marx]

Your very welcome

[Shawna]

A very small group of words with a very large impact. I was instantly sad when I read it. You did a great job drawing such emotion from so few words.

[Rhea752]

Thank you very much :)

[Aehr]

Oh my God, this is so sad! A very small poem indeed, but it has so many emotions.

[Rhea752]

Thx :)