No Room For a New Debut

All I want to do is get lost in the music 

Escape from the chaos of this life

All I want to do is ride the waves of melody

Float through the harmony without any strife

All I want to do is close my eyes 

And pretend I'm not here 

How I was I supposed to know 

The consequences, I am no seer 

All I want to do is distract myself 

From all the pain, instead I come back to

The shreds of a tattered abandoned life 

And there's no room for a new debut 

Reviews

[Stephen]

~~Beautiful poem~~ I simply adore this write. What a beautiful rhyme you hold writing this poem! All verses are nice, there`s, I find, much mystery behind the depth of your words which showing the truth of this wicked world via your beautiful words. Well penned!

[Jason White]

Well done. Reminds of how I felt when I gave up MMORPGs and what others have voiced when they've done the same.

[Stefon Napier]

Read it once and I thought it was brilliant. You cannot turn the clock back on life. You can certainly reinvent yourself overtime but there is definitely no going back. This poem read very well, smooth and rich in thought. I really thought you gave this a hard effort. Great message, great poem. Keep going.

[Rhea752]

Thank you very much!! :)

[MoriartyMesa]

I feel something, but not the emotions presented. But the message is all the same.

[Rhea752]

Thanks :)

[Tai Ryens]

It sounds inspired by poetry derived from the lyrics of a song.. nonetheless, well done.

[Rhea752]

Thanks :)

[Paige H]

This poem describes very well the way that music affects many people. Music plays a very large role in my life especially as an escape from stress and other things, so I quite enjoyed reading a piece about this feeling and function. Good work!

[Rhea752]

Thank you :D

[Baby Ricochet]

Music is a beautiful thing

[Rhea752]

Thank you :)

[Peter H]

hmmmmmmmmm this reminds me of a song rhea , did a song inspire this one ? anyhow we all go through this peril but sooner or later you'll realize these pains make us who we are i'm a stoiker somehow i don't feel these things anymore

[Rhea752]

Several songs. Thank you for the review :D