When...

sometimes i'm scared to share my writing because i think you guys won't like it, or i'm afraid to share a certain part of my past and i worry. but it's always worth it. thank you for all the support.

When you can't write

About what truly matters

Because you're scared that

Life would simply shatter. 

When you can't fully 

Explain your past 

Like not being able 

To take off a cast. 

When you're afraid that

Your life is crumbling 

That you're in ruins

It's like you're tumbling. 

When you hate yourself 

For getting lost

In those memories

And you pay the cost. 

When you read those stories 

And you think 

It's not so hard 

The ship won't sink.

When you try 

So hard to write 

And it all pours out 

Clearing your sight. 

When you destroy 

Your simple stories 

And fear comes back 

To fill you with worry. 

When you are scared 

Just use this tip 

Take the risk 

And jump the ship.

Author's Note

thank you once again for reviewing and supporting me and my writing.

Reviews

[R.A. Youngblood]

I like your flow and choice of words, your grammar spelling is alright.
And don't worry, we like it! (: ... I have no problem with following, but your lines are not so well connected, i'm not saying you should do this in a free verses, but it's not so pure, if you don't understand me, nevermind. But the feelings are clear and kinda heavy frustrating, and you can literally read what's exactly happening, that's good. All in all, poem is wonderful!
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up :D

[Michael X]

wow, the emotional turmoil is an artful interpretation of the downtrodden,
combined angst, liberation and release, remarkable form and flow.

[Amanda]

I love this. I often feel like this. Keep writing :)

[Falling Leaf.]

A lovely piece; very inspirational! No pointless words or lines; very easy to follow. Simple yet speaking of a grand idea. Love it!
~The Wilted Rose