A Nobody

What could my future behold 

An array of my choices are gold 

What if I mistakenly choose 

To be a nothing in nobody's shoes 

My future is probably bright 

But what if I came 'cross a blight 

Going from my clothes ever so fair 

To be wearing what nobodies wear 

I want my career to be a real feat 

But what if I end up on the streets 

And myself I could always accuse 

Of doing what no-one would choose 

To be nothing in nobody's shoes 

You would wear what nobodies would wear 

And do what nobody would choose 

I'm a nothing in nobody's shoes 

Author's Note

just questioning my future.

Reviews

[Rahul]

I didn't have enough time but i read your some writings because you always encourage me to write some more writings by reviewing.
I want to read your enough books but i thought to read your some ppoems first before i got the bed...
this piece's really very nice and this time i'm really speechless what to say to you now but, this below one's outstanding
My future is probably bright
But what if I came 'cross a blight

you made my night again by this wonderful piece and i just daily think about my future but past never leaves me alone and i do hard try to escape from my past but it can't....
this' write encourages me too to look into a future, run from my past and live where i'm in present.
that's a great and an awesome write that i've ever read. We all need and want everything ffrom our future but past always try to make us hide from our future, this write makes me good and inspires me to look into my future and run from my past.

Wonderful write by "Rhea" :)

[Rhea752]

Thank you very much, you're very nice :)

[Sarah W. French]

I love this poem. And of course i have had the same thoughts. But i am sure that your career will be a 'real feat'. I love reading your poems. Keep going :)

[Owlgirl]

Easy to relate to, and very well written! Lovely poetry!

[jyfjygfgujhglkjgkutgfvk..]

so typical...so easy to relate to! love it =)

[Falling Leaf.]

I love it; so many of us can relate. The only thing I would do differently is in the second line, I would change "an" to "the." Other than that, well penned!

[Erin Thomas]

I feel the same way sometimes, where I worry about choosing the wrong path. I think the key is trying to balance your presence in the present and the future because we all know not to dwell too long in the past. Worrying takes us away from the moment. This poem is fantastic! It really makes me think. Fabulous fluency!!!

[Tai Ryens]

I love this piece, it could be tied with depression as well. Well done indeed!

[Amanda]

I really love this. I think this is my favorite poem you've written

[Rhea752]

Thank you so much!!