Summer Love

A tear on my cheek

Your hand escaping mine

The end of our summer love

In the gleaming sunshine

 

Going back to my hometown

You say that we'll keep in touch

But I've heard overseas relations

Really don't last that much

 

I really can't do much

I can just hope and pray

Just sigh and keep wishing

That we'll meet again someday

 

Maybe some other week

Maybe another chance

Maybe another dream

Maybe another dance

 

Maybe another life

Maybe some other day

Maybe another time

But I hope you come my way

 

 

Author's Note

swing a review by please.

Reviews

[anxia]

This is bitter sweet. The maybes' could have been arranged in a different order though to make it more effective (jus ma thought).

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very romantic and sad little peace. A summer love ending short and sweet. The rhyming was great, i love allot of the lines. This was a great poem i enjoyed reading it. Was defiantly worth third place in my ROMANCE contest. Job well done, keep writing.

[Aehr]

thank you! :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your most welcome :)

[Danielle]

There is a longing well expressed here, for a love not forgotten. Beautiful words written!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Always good to wish for a warm summer day and love. I like the repetition. Gave strength to the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Southern Cross]

This piece really moved me..The form was perfect as it graduated from a day, to a week,to another life etc... I think we all have felt this emotion to a summer love knowing all the while that it would (and had to) come to an end. Yet we dream don't we? Lovely poem

[Flutterby aish]

Beautiful one miss!!

[natzky]

awwe....i know how it feels....:(
thanks for sharing this wonderful piece...:)

[Aehr]

thank you for reviewing it! :)

[Bella Luna]

This was so beautiful! It kind of makes me think of Grease with Danny and Sandy :) Definitely captured the aspect of fleeting summer love!

[Aehr]

thank you!

[eglantine]

this should be a song :) I could see Taylor Swift singing this lol

[Aehr]

you're right

[Marissa]

This is really great. I'd add some punctuation in there. Other than that this was fantastic.