Luminous

So drunk on the sun

White light dances in my eyes

Colours smile behind

Reviews

[Lox]

So this is the art of pros? :D I was not informed that the work of professionals would blow ones mind. :) I took the liberty to review your work Ms/Mrs rhea and am far from disappointment. I am glad I did so! I'll be seeing other works. Thank you!!!

[Aehr]

Hahaha thank you so much, Lox (if I may use that name?). You're very kind.
P.S - Ms Rhea :P Although Rhea's fine. x

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. You said a lot in the shot poem. Thank you Rhea for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ramya]

Brevity in the making...love the "drunk" usage. Being succinct is not an easy job...you did it!

[kingblaq]

haiku for drinkerds! finally!

[AK]

So succinct, yet so gripping and puissant! I crave to be transported to this luminous, dazzling land~

[Penny]

Haiku by an alcoholic :-D. Nice work, very imaginative

[Poetic Beauty]

The sun is gorgeous from its rise to its set.

[Author Rucha Joshi]

Is it a haiku?
Nice imagery!

[Aehr]

it is a haiku, yes
thank you :)

[TL Boehm]

drunk on the sun. This is an exquisite little write.

[Flutterby aish]

Takes my breath away.....