Frozen

This just came to me, I don't know, I just felt like it. Please Review!

                                      

 

I am water

Wild, fresh and moving

Bearing the weight of everything

Floating over me,

Living within me,

Fallen at my feet

I am water

 

I am water,

Misty, and dark

Flowing, never ending

Vulnerable and wet

I am water

 

I am water

Now stopped and dead cold

Not moving, stationary

Lost in time

Now,

I am ice           

Reviews

[Balkaran Sidhu]

so simple yet so amazing

[Zainab UF]

This poem just screams "I'm brilliant!"

The creativity is just superb, let me tell you. And the last stanza? Simply stunning.

Keep up the marvellous work! :)

[Cerise]

Very creative and different..well done..:D

[MOON]

Great write ode to water.

[Danielle]

How creative, I love this!

[natzky]

....wonderful and so cool..;)thanks for sharing;)

[Lina Grey]

Very creative! I love the pic and the repetition of the phrase "I am water" suddenly changing to "I am ice". Wonderful. Thank you.

[TL Boehm]

Wow. wonderful writing and the picture is a great offset to the piece