Long Arms

As my love for you enhanced

My arms grew

They grew to hold you

To hold you far away

Away you are

But tightly i hold, never letting go

Author's Note

I wrote this fairly quickly i just wanted post something. I've written 8 poems just can't find them.

Reviews

[Bubo]

Some times a short poem says far more than a long one, and the thought of arms growing to extend to the loved one is a lovely caring image, nicely done.

[Alice_In_WhateverLand]

i liked this one too, but i would have loved to have seen more done to the poem, as the emotion is there. Its great for a little poem :) :) x

[So Sick of Love]

i like it