The Distance

I have great love for you

But then I have great hate

 

The hate is drawn in by the distance;

 

I sit here thinking of all the wonderful times we cherished together

But then I sit here thinking of all the times you are not here

 

For the distance;

 

I love the day we met

But I rue the day

 

I rue for the distance;

 

Only held apart by the distance

Reviews

[Moth Phoenix]

This is a really great poem!! I can really relate =]

[Questa]

I really get this piece, its sad but i understand. Good write :)

[Alice_In_WhateverLand]

i think this poem speaks alot, even though little is said, and that is awesome :) well done :) x

[Gheeneil]

I sensed two strong, contradicting forces in this piece. Whichever the persona favored would beat the other. It's like a tug of war. Interesting write.

[Unloved_kitty]

This is a really good poem =]
Nice work

[Mauricio Montoya]

I know how it is when one is far. nice work excellent write.