Fifteen

days as being fifteen year old

When I was fourteen
I started to ask myself
What is life
If I'm already fifteen

On the 10th month,
it is my birthday
Everyone greeted me
and my crush too

After that day,
I started to feel like fifteen
I started to act like lady
Even though I'm not yet eighteen

Those days being fifteen
Is one of the happiest days ever
I'm free
And I can be crazy whenever I want to

I started to communicate with everyone
I enjoy chatting about nonsense
And talk about our favourites
And I started to understand him more

And this time,
I received a letter from a guy
That guy whom I love so much
And I jumped for joy

But these days doesn't last
I started to feel responsibility
Which is hard to handle sometimes
And can't be avoid

Even though it is hard
I realized that this is part of life
Cannot be avoided
And should be faced with strength

Author's Note

Cooments?

Reviews

[♪GetUse2MyMelodie..]

Im going through the same problems.Im young and want to have fun but there are just things I have to deal with first.Its like i have to grow up faster than my real age and be a little adult.
Nice poem it really explained that.

[Tate Morgan]

You tend to use improper grammar.
Those days being fifteen
Is one of the happiest days ever
those days refers to more than one.so next line needs to talk about many not one