Broken

Did he see me sitting there off to the side?
Did he know i was waiting for a reply?
Did he think it was okay that he put up a fight with someone with no fight?
Did he believe that i would be okay in the end?
Did he see my bones couldn't bend anymore?
Is it time to take flight?
Can my broken wings sustain the beautiful sky?
Emotionally battered can i take to flying?
                     Can I?
                  Can He?

Reviews

[Rahul]

Again a touchable and heartfelt write. you got me.1000/100

[Chris]

It left a good taste behind - so it worked, at least for me.

[Emrick]

touchy.

[ATG]

A very interesting poem. The imagery was creative and there were no noticeable errors. I did enjoy how every line is a question. That added a little extra touch to it.

[Mark D]

Thanks for sharing this,

I really like the sentiment and presentation. Anyone could relate to it. Well done and thank you