Introduction

This part will come later in the book but i wanted it to be the Introduction

The frigid air whipped around my pale face but the cold could not cool the burning desire that had just spiked through my throat. That delectable smell filled my notsrils, telling me to just attack already. An image of me cracking that human's neck and spilling their sweet nectar ran through my mind. God that heavenly image was brining out the devil inside me. Oh how I longed for that sweet, warm taste to fill my mouth. So I charged at the man, letting my instincts take over instead of my common sense.

Author's Note

Note: This is just a little taste of my book so please, I would like constructive criticism but do not be rude!

Reviews

[frogbean]

this sounds like it could turn out to be a good book. i think it is about vampires. you should expand this i agree. you also have good vocabulary. i cant wait untill i read the rest of your story.

FrOgBeAn-
Live life openly and dont hide stupid s**t take nothing to heart and constantly watch your back

[Adrian Dawne]

Ahh! You got my attention already! Haha. Would this be a prologue or just an intro? If a prologue, it should be longer^^ awesome job!!